Thursday, March 31, 2016

                                                              Chinese new year celebration

                        Chinese new year celebration is always the most exciting event of the year. We can get lots of red envelope which contains money inside. But this year, it's a little bit different for me. Because my grandfather has just passed away last two month, my family can't celebrate Chinese new year as great as other people and we can't even give red envelopes. So, in the morning, me and my family went to my grandmothers house. there, we eat together but we can't eat at the restaurant because some said that if someone in your family has just passed away, then, we can't celebrate Chinese new year like others. After we ate at my grandmother's house, me went to my other grandmother's house and there, we ate again :v
but then, my grandmother asked me if i want to go to a villa where i can meet all of my relatives there, but only me, my mom and dad can't go there. So, i said yes, and after that, i went back home to have a nap for a while because there's nothing that i can do much at home. Finally, around 5 P.M, my mom woke me up and asked me to take a bath because my grandmother is going to pick me up around 6 p.m. After i took a bath, i prepared everything and i waited for my grandmother to come. Then, around 6 p.m, my grandmother picked me up then, we went to the villa, there, i met all of my relatives and they gave me a lot of red envelopes, this is the part that i'm waiting for. Then, we talked a little then we went home. My grandmother drove me to my house then she went to hers. That's my chinese new year celebration
           

4 comments:

  1. Your writing is really good and you use correct tenses but it needs to be add more detail

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  2. I spotted a few mistakes in your composition and you lack detail. well done though:)

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  3. Your writing is good, but you have to be more pay attention to your capital letter. Example, you must put a capital letter in front of a sentence. GOOD LUCK!

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  4. Jason is correct. Use capital words when necessary. Use 'I'.
    Remember to use V2 always in Recount writing.
    Practise again and again.

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